Showing posts with label goodbye. Show all posts
Showing posts with label goodbye. Show all posts

Thursday, November 4, 2021

6th Jane Reichhold Memorial Haiga Contest - First Place and First Runner-up!

Who wants to do the happy dance with me? Thank you, Lord for my two recent awards - First Place in the Traditional Category and First Runner-Up in the Photography and Mixed Media Category. This is one of the beautiful ways you have turned my life experiences into gifts to be shared to everyone! I am very grateful!!!

I hope you all enjoy these. Congratulations to all the winner! See all the winners and the commentaries here


First Place - Traditional Category

At first reading and viewing, this haiga by Chrissi Villa grips you. With each successive reading, the compounding layers of possibilities in this senryu are echoed visually in the varied and multi-textured circles of the image. One can’t help but to wonder of the other rings once worn. Are the bestowers now as nameless as the moon? The wonderful balance between fragment, phrase, and image invites the reader to insert themself into the narrative and make it their own without diminishing the original intent of the author, were we privy to it. (Commentaries by judges Kelly Sauvage and Bryan Rickert)

                             First Runner-Up - Photography and Mixed Media Category

This haiga by Chrissi Villa activates all our senses, as she invites us to view the textures, smell the flowers, and contemplate all the varied interpretations of her one line senryu. The image and senryu combined show a wonderful balance of softness and strength; yet, it is the sense of whimsy that offers an uncommon optimism. Oftentimes, when we think of abandoning a place or a situation, it is in the context of escape. Yet, in this instance, the leaving is a lofting—ripe with infinite possibility. (Commentaries by judges Kelly Sauvage and Bryan Rickert)


Sunday, January 20, 2019

Autumn Moon Haiku Contest 2018



Filipino translation:

                                                                      paghulog ng dahon . . .
paghahanap ng paraan
para magpaalam

Monday, June 18, 2018

Inaugural Issue of Ephemerae (part 3)

Finally, these two tanka were published! Both had been in my to-revise-notepad for quite some time.


After some revisions and a little help from the editor of Ephemerae, this was finally accepted. 


Sunday, April 3, 2016

Ribbons Winter 2016


STUPOR


no one 
calling my name
this morning
a cup of water stays cold
in the microwave

preparations
for the memorial 
the chrysanthemums
quietly wither
on the side

an avalanche 
of memories snowballing
into grief
the stories behind
a box of receipts

every now and then 
the flicker of a firefly . . .
still in my hand
all of you I need
to let go

not accepting
what goodbye really means
my breath lingers
in every shape and sound
of spring dusk


Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Tanka Poet on Site (August 23 prompt)


his glazed look
like I'm not there at all . . .
I feel my life
being sucked out of me
before he even leaves



Prompt: saying goodbye

See my post here.