Showing posts with label Ed Bremson. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Ed Bremson. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 3, 2021

Carrying Sunrays by Bakhtiyar Amini


So happy to release Velvet Dusk Publishing's first book for 2021! Congratulations to 
Bakhtiyar Amini! Thank you so much, Hemap
riya Chellappan, for your delightful illustrations. Click the picture below to read blurbs written by
Savich
.
Thank you so much, Ed and Agnes!

Covert art and design by yours truly!

Here's the introduction that I wrote for this book.

As the title Carrying Sunrays implies, this haiku collection by Bakhtiyar Amini reflects the brighter side of the poet’s everyday experiences and his surroundings. From the first to the last page of this book, you will discover that he carries no excess baggage such as resentment, hate, or anger, despite all his misfortunes in life. Instead, he takes with him his rose-colored glasses.

new angle
unwilling to take off
my rose-colored glasses

His sense of humor, delight in children, compassion for little creatures, simplicity, and honesty remind me of Issa, one of Japan’s famous haiku poets more than two centuries ago.

Most of Bakhtiyar’s poetry is richly comical. It does not have the irreverent humor of Issa, but his poems never fail to make me laugh.

pension fund
what if I decide to live
until I’m one hundred

His haiku focuses not only on the humorous side of human nature, but also on nature.

world map
a fly choosing
my country

Like Issa, Bakhtiyar is fond of children, as evident in the following haiku:

unfamiliar flower
let me call you
by my daughter’s name

The lives of the smallest creatures also draw his attention. He speaks to them with compassion and reverence.

turning off the light
you have to go to sleep, too
little moths

The previous senryu takes me back to one of Issa’s hundreds of poems about flies, fleas, crickets, bugs, and other small creatures.

Don’t worry, spiders
I keep house
casually

From my email exchanges with Bakhtiyar, I discovered a few significant facts about his life that bear similarity to Issa's. Just as Issa lived in a village, Bakhtiyar was born and raised in a village in Tajikistan. In their poetry, both display, not only their keen awareness of their rural surroundings, but also their honesty in revealing life’s circumstances.

insomnia
counting again
dogs in the village

village home
a shoelace on the door
instead of a lock

With the use of simple words, Bakhtiyar reveals universal truths—based on his own personal tragedies—that are contemporary and timeless.

refugee camp
pork and beef cooking
in the samе pan

Although he is similar in many ways to Issa, Bakhtiyar undoubtedly stands out in the haiku community because of his rose-colored glasses and his flair for the unexpected, which are enriched by his unique experiences, intense awareness, and openness to see the extraordinary in ordinary things.

looking for myself
the sun fits into
a raindrop
(inspired by Omar Khayyam, a famous Persian poet)

—Christine L. Villa, Founding Editor of Frameless Sky

Monday, January 21, 2013

The Best of Five Line Poems 2012 Now Available

     Ed Bremson did it again! His new ebook, The Best of Five Line Poems 2012, has made it to #3 among poetry books in the Kindle store. This wonderful collection, containing some samples of poems posted in the Facebook group "Five Line Poems" and "Tanka Poet Society" in 2012, may be purchased here
     Here are the three poems I've contributed to this ebook. 

frost moon
I stare at another
candy wrapper
waiting for a sugar high
to fill my emptiness

stardust
on New Year's eve . . .
our hope
shining even brighter
with every kiss

sunlight streaming
through the kitchen window . . .
as I wash the dishes
how you smile at me
is all I can imagine

Wednesday, December 5, 2012

The Best of Mijikai Haiku 2012 is a Big Hit!

 
     Such fabulous news! The Best of Mijikai Haiku 2012 has been #1 best seller in Asian Poetry on Amazon.
 

     Here's the latest update from Ed Bremson, the man behind the book's success:
 
     Our ebook is now #1 in Asian Poetry, #2 in Haiku. Whoopee!
 
     The way this works is we've sold about a dozen books in the past 22 hours so that pushes up father up to the top of the list, solely because of the activity. I think I've seen this happen before with other books, start out good, then slack off later. Anyway, as I've said earlier, the recognition -- for all of us -- is good. Right now, today, you are all a part of a #1 bestselling book on Amazon, and you deserve to be proud. 

     The Best of Mijikai Haiku 2012 is a collection of 200 Mijikai haiku, written by 50 poets from a group on Facebook called Mijikai Haiku. This is a just sampling from the group, whose membership has swiftly increased in a period of few months. Currently, there are 117 members from different locations such as Vietnam, Mongolia, Punjab, India, Japan, Turkey, Russia, Croatia, Denmark, Canada, California, Arkansas, and North Carolina. 
     Click this link to purchase your own copy. Yes, it's for real! For just 99 cents, you have a precious book to keep! ;-)

Wednesday, November 21, 2012

The Best of Mijikai Haiku 2012

     Something exciting is going on at one special corner of the haiku community! Where? Just click your mouse to Mijikai Haiku on Facebook and you'll find out that before the year ends, The Best of Mijikai Haiku 2012 will be available on Kindle for 99 cents.  
 
 
 
     How does one join in? All you have to do is submit four of your Mijikai haiku, brief or short haiku, to Ed Bremson on Mijikai Haiku  (a haiku group on Facebook) no later than December 5. If you are not a member yet of Mijikai Haiku, click Join Us and wait for approval. Once your request is approved, you'll be able to check out the action and submit your poems to Ed Bremson in a private message. 
     Two weeks fly by quickly so don't waste your time. Gather your four best poems and be a part of this wonderful collection!
 

Sunday, October 21, 2012

Not a Single Star

     I was invited by Ed Bremson to join another group in Facebook called Five Line Poems. For my first post, I wrote this before I went to bed.

 
not a single star
speaks to me tonight
but all these poems
I tuck under my pillow
with a smile


     It was quite liberating writing this poem because all I had to do was write a poem with five lines. I didn't have to  stick to the rules of a good tanka, a kind of poetry I need to learn more about. 
     You may read comments on my poem here. If you think you'd like to join us, check out Five Line Poems.

Monday, October 15, 2012

Mijikai Haiku


autumn skies
words just
tumble down


     This is my first Mijikai Haiku. Sounds new to you, I'm sure. It's actually a group on Facebook which was recently created by Ed Bremson. According to him, Mijikai Haiku means a short or brief haiku. 
     More details below from him -

     Some possible ideas include taking a haiku and paring it down to its bare essentials, eliminating unnecessary words; or writing a haiku from scratch by concentrating on images instead of grammar. Another idea is to paint images with only a few words, perhaps make impressionistic haiku, using broad strokes. Of course there are many ways to do this. I’m not going to tell you how to use your imagination. Much of the time I personally try to make an actual haiku. Let me give an example. Here is a poem I wrote:

spring moonlight –
a black cat waits silently
in the yard

In Mijikai Haiku, how might we change this? Perhaps:

moonlight
black cat
yard

or

black cat
moonlight
yard

Of course it would also be possible to say:

moonlight / black cat / in my yard OR EVEN
moonlight / in my yard / black cat

You might ask, why do you say “in my yard”? Isn’t that being verbose? Well, “in my yard” is just one possibility. And a lot of the process depends on the effect the poet is trying to convey. And I did cut it down from ten words to six, from thirteen syllables down to seven, which fits in with the spirit of Mijikai Haiku, imho.

Of course, there are many ways to make Mijikai Haiku. Some have experimented using one word, two words, three words, etc.

The above examples are not the only possibilities. Given the imagination of human beings, who knows what paths of creativity and expression we might go down. BY THE WAY, particularly with Mijikai Haiku, there are no correct ways to say this or that. There are only new ideas. Also, like Mijikai Haiku, this statement is a work in progress.

One last thing: let’s make this a fun and safe place to carry on this experiment. Let’s be nice and pleasant to each other so everyone can have fun.



     It's an open group so see for yourself if you'd like to experiment on this kind of haiku. Click here to see comments on my first attempt. I managed to cut it down to 6 words. Most haiku posted over there are even shorter than mine. Some work for me; some don't. I think I like the idea of trimming unnecessary words as long as it will not change or obscure the meaning of what the poet is trying to say. I have yet to read or write a haiku that can pack a lot of meaning or layers of meaning in such a very rare limited number of words like four or five. How about 1-3 words? Is that possible? Like Ed says, it's a work in progress. Who knows? Somebody may come up with one. For the meantime as new ideas may come up, I'm willing to experiment and join the fun. 

Sunday, September 16, 2012

Synesthesia

     Do you know the definition of synesthesia? I've heard this question twice ever since it was announced that the prompt for the Svetlana Marisova Memorial Kukai was synesthesia in oneness of all things. I guess not everybody has heard about it. To answer the question of a dear friend of mine, I cited a haiku that I wrote last year.  


floating on water
the scent of magnolia
summer breeze
 

     According to Chen-ou Liu, this is an effective use of synesthesia. Honestly, it came as a surprise to me as I wasn't even aware that I was using a certain technique or device in my haiku writing. I had to look it up in the internet so I could comprehend what he was talking about.
     For the second person, who posted her inquiry on Free Haiga, I took the liberty of researching for her. Here was the article that I found -  Thoughts on Juxtaposition Ed Bremson also jumped in to help her by giving this site - Sensing Tanka: Perceiving Life Beyond the Ordinary
     If you want to read more about synesthesia, here are some interesting articles.

Svetlana Marisova Memorial Kukai - 3rd place

     I still can't believe that I won third prize in the Svetlana Mirasova Memorial Kukai. There are so many stunning haiku in this contest. If I were asked to vote again, I would still have a hard time making up my mind. Take a look at this link so you would know what I mean. http://marisova.com/svetlana-marisova-memorial-kukai-results/ 
 

     Here's my winning entry:

 
passing clouds
the scent of honeysuckle
in a crow's wings

 
 
     Thanks to Ed Bremson, Ted van Zutphen, and Hansha Teki for inviting me to join in.