I was invited by Ed Bremson to join another group in Facebook called Five Line Poems. For my first post, I wrote this before I went to bed.
not a single star
speaks to me tonight
but all these poems
I tuck under my pillow
with a smile
It was quite liberating writing this poem because all I had to do was write a poem with five lines. I didn't have to stick to the rules of a good tanka, a kind of poetry I need to learn more about.
You may read comments on my poem here. If you think you'd like to join us, check out Five Line Poems.
