floating on water
the scent of magnolia
summer breeze
Semifinalist for the month of August 2011
Shukan New York Seikatsu newspaper
I like this haiku more than the other one that made it in the semifinals last month.
Make the universe your companion, always bearing in mind the true nature of things—mountains and rivers, trees and grasses, and humanity—and enjoy the falling blossoms and the scattering leaves. ~Bashō
Christine,
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Beautifully written.
Chen-ou
Christine,
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Beautifully written.
Chen-ou
Thanks! :-)
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