Make the universe your companion, always bearing in mind the true nature of things—mountains and rivers, trees and grasses, and humanity—and enjoy the falling blossoms and the scattering leaves. ~Bashō
on the seventh night of the seventh moonI'll wait for you by the bridgeto make it into a tanka. A bit too lengthy but what do you think?
I think it's too lengthy because there's a limit to the number of syllables. Looking forward to a re-write. :-)
on the seventh night of the seventh moon
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to make it into a tanka. A bit too lengthy but what do you think?
I think it's too lengthy because there's a limit to the number of syllables. Looking forward to a re-write. :-)
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