tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3166772311217512209.post4921947380698679897..comments2023-04-25T17:05:26.301-07:00Comments on BLOSSOM RAIN: Star MythsChristine "Chrissi" L. Villahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17834613429230278257noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3166772311217512209.post-24278869085474717762012-08-08T00:12:09.807-07:002012-08-08T00:12:09.807-07:00I think it's too lengthy because there's a...I think it's too lengthy because there's a limit to the number of syllables. Looking forward to a re-write. :-)Christine "Chrissi" L. Villahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17834613429230278257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3166772311217512209.post-59303656561279675232012-08-07T23:49:23.919-07:002012-08-07T23:49:23.919-07:00on the seventh night of the seventh moon
I'll ...on the seventh night of the seventh moon<br />I'll wait for you by the bridge<br /><br />to make it into a tanka. A bit too lengthy but what do you think?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com