Wednesday, August 8, 2012


    August 8 NaHaiWriMo prompt is "spider", provided by Sheila Windsor.

wrapped in a web
of his spider tattoo . . .
summer embrace

     This is a perfect example of repetition in haiku. I wasn't sure of it until I posted it. Thanks to Kathy Uyen Nguyen's and Alee Imperial Albano's comments. Now I know that it really needs a revision. 
     Comments on my haiku may be found here. Click this to get more information about the 31 Different NaHaiWrimo Prompters in August 2012. 

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