Showing posts with label spider. Show all posts
Showing posts with label spider. Show all posts

Thursday, August 30, 2012

Fence

   August 30 NaHaiWriMo prompt is "fence", provided by Terri Hale French.


silence  between us . . .
the criss cross fence
of spider silk

   


    Comments on my haiku may be found here. Click this for more information on the 31 Different NaHaiWriMo Prompters in August 2012.


Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Spider

    August 8 NaHaiWriMo prompt is "spider", provided by Sheila Windsor.

wrapped in a web
of his spider tattoo . . .
summer embrace


     This is a perfect example of repetition in haiku. I wasn't sure of it until I posted it. Thanks to Kathy Uyen Nguyen's and Alee Imperial Albano's comments. Now I know that it really needs a revision. 
     Comments on my haiku may be found here. Click this to get more information about the 31 Different NaHaiWrimo Prompters in August 2012.