Showing posts with label orginal haiku. Show all posts
Showing posts with label orginal haiku. Show all posts

Tuesday, March 28, 2017

Sunday, March 5, 2017

Butterfly Dream: Death Anniversary Haiku

     Another post in NeverEnding Story. This time Chen-ou Liu selected one of my haiku from The Bluebird's Cry. His translation in Chinese may be read here.


tracing the cracks
on his leather chair . . .

death anniversary


Chen-ou's comment:

The unexpected yet emotionally power closing line lifts the poem out of the ordinary, and on a second reading, the opening image of "cracks on his leather chair" successfully carries emotional weight and symbolic significance.

Thursday, August 23, 2012

Heat

   August 23 NaHaiWriMo prompt is "heat", provided by Pris Campbell.


embers
blowing in the wind . . .

careless whispers
 


    Comments on my haiku may be found here. Click this for more information on the 31 Different NaHaiWriMo Prompters in August 2012.