Saturday, December 1, 2012

Evening Storm


evening storm
I wrestle with voices
in my head
 


Free Format
subject: night sounds


Shared with Haiku Heights #198
prompt: storm 

16 comments:

  1. I love this one Christine, battling thoughts that are brewing inside! Wonderful.

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  2. Nice take on the voices amid the evening storm ~

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  3. These kinds of storms are some of the most ferocious, it seems...

    Still the Storm

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  4. Leo's haiku also speaks of inner storms
    interesting

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  5. I think I know the sound of those voices and the sensation of wrestling too. I marvel at your brevity and depth!

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  6. Thank you - Pranita, Leo, Grace, Magical Mystical Taecher, Sabio, WabiSabi! I appreciate the time and effort in leaving such kind comments. Have a good day all of you!

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  7. The voices in the mind can often overwhelm any physical storm!

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    1. I agree! Hi, Gemma. Thank you for visiting my blog!

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  8. Whoa! as a therapist, I find this is right on the money. Excellent

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    1. Thank you, Judith. Yah, I hope I overcome them eventually. Nice seeing you here again.

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  9. Our biggest contender is lurking inside us whose voice is difficult to drown. Nice haiku!

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  10. Those storms inside can send you flying

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  11. Simple and sweet haiku Christine :)

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