Thursday, May 10, 2012

1st International Kukai - 9th place tie

spring dawn . . .
nestling on bare branches
a sparrow's song

 
 
Prompt: sparrow

spring dawn . . .
nestling on bare branches
a sparrow's song
all this stirring in my heart
I find your hand in mine

Kathy Uyen Nguyen

Thank you, my dear friend, for this lovely collaborative tanka.

2 comments:

  1. spring dawn . . .
    nestling on bare branches
    a sparrow's song
    all this stirring in my heart
    I find your hand in mine

    Of course, yours a lovely 'ku. I'm having too much fun turning your 'ku into a collaborative tanka. :)

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  2. I'm so glad that you've been inspired to write a tanka for my haiku. I love it! :-)

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