Wednesday, May 9, 2012

1st International Kukai - 6th place


opening my window
I catch a song
of a sparrow

 
Prompt: sparrow


opening my window
I catch a song 
of a sparrow . . .
if only my words could
fill such fragrance

Finally, my very first collaborative tanka with Kathy Uyen Nguyen. :-)

5 comments:

  1. congrats Christine, a very pleasent song, sorry -verse :)

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  2. opening my window
    I catch a song
    of a sparrow . . .
    if only my words could
    fill such fragrance


    Made your 'ku into a tanka. :) *Hugs* Glad to have you as a friend too!

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    1. Thank you so much for this, Kathy! You did it again! Such a wonderful tanka! I should one day learn how to write one. I just can't find the time yet.

      I'm glad to have you as a friend, too, Kathy! :-)

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  3. I like this one even better. Congratulations again. :)

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    1. Actually, this might sound familiar to you. Unconsciously, I wrote a haiku very similar to Cara Holman's haiku- the one she posted on I Doodle, You 'Ku. I just realized after submitting this one.

      Thanks for appreciating it! :-)

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