Showing posts with label Emerald bay. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Emerald bay. Show all posts

Wednesday, July 24, 2013

Tanka Poets on Site (July 14 prompt)


the shift of colors
of Emerald bay . . .
my heart unwavering
under your eyes that turn
from blue to green

revision:

the sparkle and depth
of Emerald bay . . .
my heart unwavering
under his gaze that turn

from blue to green



prompt: eyes
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