While I was initially experimenting on this new kind of poetry created by Ernesto Santiago, I came up with a few examples, but this particular one works for me. I first posted it on PH-Philippine Haiku.
empty mug . . .
a sunbeam fills up
my heart
Later on I posted this on Dos Por Dos on Facebook. Click here to see some comments.
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Here's E. Santiago's introduction to this new form of poetry:
What is Dos Por Dos Poetry? Dos por dos—is a contemporary non-rhyming form of Filipino poetry that consists of three lines with the first line having two words, the second line having four words, and the third line having two words (2 words / 4 words / 2 words) scheme. The subject matter and / or the imagery present a snippet of man's every day existence. The line breaks of dos por dos serve as punctuation, or one can opt for a dash, colon, semicolon, or ellipsis. There are no caps used, unless of course it is needed. Dos por dos poetry is the offspring of an experimentation on Japanese micro poetry: haiku / senryu. A poem is a dos por dos haiku when it is written as haiku and it deals about nature, and it can be formulated as in the above-mentioned format of 2 words / 4 words / 2 words, or in a dos por dos variant form of haiku syllables count of 2/4/2 scheme. A poem is technically a dos por dos senryu when the subject matter is not about nature, but of human foibles. Dos por dos literally means two times two or 2 by 2. Dos por dos form of poetry is invented January 30, 2014 by Ernesto P. Santiago, PH—Philippine Haiku FB group creator. Below some poems from PH-Philippine Haiku poets as examples.
Dos Por Dos Poetry (2 words / 4 words / 2 words)
coffee cups
an aftertaste of dreams
spreads out
Angelo Ancheta
heavy-eyed...
sleep doesn't come easy
for dreams
Anne Carly Abad
born anew
a dos por dos
haiku Filipino
Santíago Víllafanía
peppermint taste
the thrill of waiting
for beginnings
Chrissi Villa
crossing points...
these bats can see
the future
-Ginyu #59, 2013, Japan
Ernesto P. Santiago
computer keypads
run amok in silence
making history
Edic J. Piano
Dos Por Dos Haiku Poems (2/4/2 syllables)
watching
the moon transform...
stillness
Willie Bongky
Dos Por Dos Senryu Poems (2/4/2 words/syllables)
do re
mi fa sol la
si do
Santíago Víllafanía
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